A wish is hope unfulfilled
No, it is one never fulfilled.
I wish I were handsome,
I hope my life is fulsome.
I wish I always smiled.
I hope I do when I'm riled.
I wish I never procrastinate,
When I do, I hope I am not too late.
I wish I never die,
When I do, I hope I don't cry.
I wish I feel no pain,
When I do, I hope I don't wish again.
In that vein, it should be 'my dying hope' not 'my dying wish'.
No, it is one never fulfilled.
I wish I were handsome,
I hope my life is fulsome.
I wish I always smiled.
I hope I do when I'm riled.
I wish I never procrastinate,
When I do, I hope I am not too late.
I wish I never die,
When I do, I hope I don't cry.
I wish I feel no pain,
When I do, I hope I don't wish again.
In that vein, it should be 'my dying hope' not 'my dying wish'.
gleaming words! good that you are "inspired"! keep writing!
ReplyDeleteWonderful!! I love the intensity, but hope it doesn't reflect any personal cynicism.. be happy :)
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